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- Do you remember the rumours on my house ?
- Those who said that it was built on an ancien temple ?
- You know some rumours are true, right ?
- Don't say me that...
- Yep !
Jean directed Eric in his cellar. He took a pencil and drew something on a brick. A door appeared on the wall, leading to a room filled with books.
- It's crazy ! How did you find that ?
- It's... A long story, i'll tell you later. Look all these books instead ! They all relate an unknow legend !
-What sort of legend ?
- It's about a person who goes on an adventure to seal a fierce god who threatens the world. Also, there's something strange : according to some of the books, it's a man, and according to the others, it's a woman...
- Looks like in this one, it's a woman.
- There's something more impressive than these books! Looks what's written here :"To open the way to the sacred treasure, 2 young men must be in this room."
- Ah, i see why you bring me here...
- Now that the circumstances are fulfilled, something must happen...
- Wait a second... This door wasn't there before, isn't it ? Let's go !
- What's behind the door ?
- Just more books, nothing more... Perhaps there's another thing to do?
- Look, there's another note on the ground ! On this one, it's written "To move to the next trial, a young man and a young woman must be in this room."
- Stuck again ? Damn... Let's look about these books, at least...
- Look, this is some spellbooks ! Do you think that they work ?
- It's written here that all these spells work only when the book is in your hand and that you recit the spell.
- And here, it's written that they all begin by "Delabo"...
- Do you think that we should try a spell ?
- Of course ! I have found an interesting one, listen : "Delabosicataru" !

Suddenly, Eric began to fell strange : something between his legs was missing. Then, his hair grew at high-speed and became pink. His hips extended, and his voice became thin. While he was under the shock, 2 huges orbs appeared on his chest.
Then, Eric became Erica.

- What the... I'm a girl ! Why did you do that ? Why ?!
- Er... I wasn't thinking that it could work...
- Change me now !
- I'll do when we'll go in the next room !
-Are you stupid ? We can't go in the next room, we need a man and a... Ah, that's not stupid, indeed... You change me right after, ok ?
- Yes, don't worry...
-Ok, here we go, and quickly, because I don't like this empty space between my legs... And it's difficult to move with this chest, it's so broad...
- Er... Yeah, let's see what's in the next room...
- A room filled with books again ?
- It's some spellbooks, once again...
- It's written here that they must be in your hand too, and that they begin by "Rapilo", this time.
- There's a note on the ground again... 3 women have to be here to go to the next room ? This time, we are definitely struck...
- Not so fast, I think I have found the solution !
- A spell ?
- Yep ! This one should replicate you and transform you into a girl !
- Are... you sure you know what you're doing ?
- Of course, just listen : "Rapilomiratou" !

Before Jean could say something, another Jean was in front of him. Their hair began to grow at high-speed : one became blond, the other remained brown. Their hips grown at the same time, and their voice changed. Their chest expended until 2 huge orbs appeared.
Finally, something precious vanished between their legs.
And so, Jean became Jeanne and Jeannine.

- I think that you made a mistake in your formulation : nothing happened to us, Erica...
- What ?!
- You surely made a mistake...
- But... What have I done ?
- Are you sure that you have read all the formula ?
- Ah, I didn't see that : "These spell change the past. Only the one who said the spell will remember the old past, but not if he is included in the spell." Oh no...
- Oh, I found a great spell ! It will change us into sister, like we have always dreamt ! *Giggle*
- What a great idea, said it quickly, I can't wait !
- No, wait ! NO !
- "Rapilomitachou" !
- Nothing happened, sis !
- It's my tourn to try ! I found one that I like : it will give us random animal parts... "Rapilorouta" !
- Once again, nothing happens, nya...
- These books must have a problem, moo...
- Let's move into the next room, instead, we're so close ! *Giggle*
- Yes, let's go ! Moo !
- Oh, look, nya ! A statuette, nya !
- She's pretty...
- I'll take it, moo !
- But... She just vanished...
- ...Finally, I'm free!...
- Er... Who said that, nya ?
- It's not me, sis !
- Not me, moo !
- I have surely dreamt... Ok, what do we do, now, nya ?
- Let's have more fun with the books !
- Good idea, moo ! *Giggle*
- I've found an interesting one : with that, we could invoke these spells books whenever w want ! "Delabomitoufa" !
- It's work, nya ! *Giggle*
- There's an interesting one, here, moo. It should give us random clothes that could be wear wherever we want without disturbing everyone, moo... "Rapilopicato" !
- My favourite cloak haven't change, nya...
- Fortunately nothing change, I like too much my tie...
- My precious biniki haven't change too moo... Thanks god, in fact, moo !
- Do you want to flirt with cute guys, sis ? *Giggle*
- Oh yes, let's go, nya !
- I agree, let's have some fun, moo !
:iconnathanathan:
It's my first story ^_^
I'll probably continue it later...

...I'm not very good in English, so the story must be filled with mispellings, sorry T-T
Don't hesitate to say where my mispellings are : with that, i could correct this story and I'll do less mispellings in my next stories :)

I don't own the pictures...
Here's the links :
Bunnygirl : [link]
Cowgirl : [link]
Catgirl : [link]
I recommend you to see the original pictures ^_^
Cause I don't know how to make the picture bigger T-T
(Little Edit : the links work, now ^_^')
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:iconyouwontgetwhatyousee:
tg is not my zone but its actually this months topic on my calender and of the few i have read this one actually kept me a bit interested i am very impressed.
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:iconnathanathan:
(Sorry to reply so late...)

Hey, thank you, you don't know how this sort of comment is so great to hear :D

I'm so far behind other artists... I could redirect you to better writers :)
(Like the great and incroyable :iconmajorkerina: , even if you're not in tg, you must see at least one of these stories :D)
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:iconyouwontgetwhatyousee:
okay and I`ll put you up to the challenge by asking you to please read my stories
And make sure to spread the word haha thanks!
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~nathan08111995 Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Was fun reading! Yu have an interesting creativity!
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:iconnathanathan:
Hey, thanks :D
It's thanks to you that I wrote this story ^_^
I have an interesting creativity, really ? :o
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:iconnathan08111995:
~nathan08111995 Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, and you also have a verry living dialogue? (I don't know how to say that:lol:)
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:iconnathanathan:
I see what you want to say ^_^
I'm not very good with a narrator so I always describe everything with dialogues :p


I'll do more but I'm taking my exams so it must take a lot of time ^_^'
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~nathan08111995 Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is good to use your good qualities.

Good luck with your exams.
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:iconffecchifan:
This was interesting...
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:iconnathanathan:
In the good way ? :P
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